The war of the Tsumirans and Braxans
Clash! the battle was already in full swing before the travellers even
had any idea what was happening, they heard steel clashing with steel.
Glowing red flames flickered through the small holes on the door,
they exited the door and went to see what was happening. They
stared at the sight of a loud brawl. Suddenly a huge flame erupted from
the centre, followed by a loud bang! sending people flying in all
directions. What a gruesome sight. Then they heard a faint whisper
gradually getting louder. “It isn’t necessary, surely it isn’t for us to continue
to spill blood?”
Yay! A great piece of writing, Eddie. Your choose of adjectives and verbs help to make your text come alive. Well done.
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